I guess the trick to making things that look decent is to spend several hours on them. Here's my Saturday evening.
Daww, I think she was probably hated by most pegasi or other ponies mabey cause she was different with her Shy personality and left out which made her sad, but mabey when humans came to her and told her she was the cutest pony they've seen, and then those ponies saw they were wrong about her and then she was liked again and thought how cute.
BTW I think Fluttershy needs a hug*hugs her*.
Awww! I'd hug her.
Oh Fluttershy, don't me sad.
Aw, you really captured Fluttershy's sad side here.
She's upset at the most darkest places in the world...the internet.
Another very nice drawing from you! It looks fantastic!